Review | The Emperor of Paris, CS Richardson

CS Richardson’s The Emperor of Paris is a beautiful book. When I received my review copy, I could barely put it down — the cover, the design on the inside covers and the first few pages are all absolutely beautiful. Kudos to Kelly Hill and Terri Nimmo for such a lovely book design.

Richardson’s story, about the circumstances leading up to the meeting and falling in love of an illiterate Parisian baker and a disfigured woman who loves books and art, is similarly beautiful. I do think it’s the kind of story you need to be in the mood to appreciate — Richardson’s words are clearly meant to cast a spell on the reader and transport the reader to an a historical Paris with an almost magical glow. I happened to read my copy in a coffee shop, and while I enjoyed the story and appreciated the author’s craft, I wasn’t quite transported. I think it’s partly because I had been looking forward to the romance between Octavio (the baker) and Isabeau (the woman), but instead the story focused on the lead up to that romance, as well as the stories of the characters around them. So I was disappointed by the limited interaction between the Octavio and Isabeau. Or perhaps I would have appreciated it more if I were in a different environment, one where I could really lose myself in a fairy tale.

Richardson’s story reads like a fairy tale. While there are references to the war and to soldiers, the language evokes sensation and a sense of timelessness rather than situates the tale within a specific historical framework. There are figures rather than characters, and even though each person in the story has a quirk or defining characteristic that adds texture, they exist mostly to add to the fabric of their community, and form a lush, colourful mosaic. Storytelling forms a big part of the narrative, and Emperor of Paris is more a love story about storytelling as it is a love story between individuals. Isabeau, born to parents obsessed with beauty and disfigured by an accident at a young age, finds refuge in stories. She loses herself in books, but more than that, she also immerses herself in the beauty of visual art. The paintings in the Louvre themselves have stories to tell, and their beauty provides Isabeau a place behind which to hide her own physical flaws.

The significance of storytelling for Octavio and his father and grandfather is even more profound, because their illiteracy compels them to create stories rather than read them. There’s a wonderful moment when Octavio’s father shows him an image from a newspaper of someone getting shot, but then covers the image of the gunman, then asks him what he thinks is happening in the photo. The father-son dynamic in crafting a whimsical tale out of what was originally a horrific image is compelling, and provides one of the most powerful moments in the novel. Octavio’s weekly ritual, later in the book, of going to the Louvre and creating stories from those paintings is both a means to bring him into Isabeau’s world and a touching continuation of a family tradition.

It’s a beautifully written book, and, befitting a story so much about the power of storytelling and visual art, it’s also beautifully packaged. I do think the narrative style requires a bit of receptiveness and desire to fall under its spell. I, unfortunately, wasn’t spellbound, but I do look forward to giving this book another try, perhaps in some musty basement archives of an art gallery, or in a sidewalk cafe far from the city, chocolate brioche in hand.

Review | What Kills Me, Wynne Channing

Poor Zee. All she wanted was a summer fling with a hot Italian guy. At 17, the only fling she’s ever had with a guy “was when Felix Lewis flung me in the air during cheerleading tryouts.” Unfortunately, fling prospect Paolo turns out to be more dangerous than she’d realized, and Zee is turned into a vampire. Not just any vampire, but quite possibly the vampire prophesied to “bring about the death of the entire vampire race.” Quite a lot for a clumsy, awkward girl to deal with, especially when the vampire Monarchy has her in their sights.

Wynne Channing has quite the task with What Kills Me, overcoming the Twilight stigma and distinguishing her book from the shelves of other vampire YA novels. She does so with humour and some pretty cool kung fu fight scenes. To be honest, Channing hooked me with her second paragraph: “I walked out of the bakery with a box of cannoli…” I’m almost certain her choice of pastry is incidental, but that line, so close after the foreboding vampire prophecy in the epigraph, made me remember “Leave the gun. Take the cannoli.” from The Godfather. Zee should’ve taken the gun and left the cannoli, eh?

For the first few chapters, I thought the book was pretty solid — interesting, with Zee turning into a vampire and going on the run — but as a whole, it didn’t really grab me or compel me to keep reading. There’s a really touching passage where another vampire advises Zee to let her family think she’s dead:

“If they believe that you are alive, they will wait for you to come home.”

“What’s wrong with that?” I said, though I knew the answer.

“They will wait forever. They will never grieve and they will never move on.”

“I don’t know which is worse. Having them wait or having them move on.” [17%]

Heartbreaking reality of a vampire’s new life, and Channing renders it with beautiful simplicity. There are similarly wonderful moments in the first few chapters of the book that also stood out for me, but I wasn’t taken in quite yet.

What Kills Me really took off, in my opinion, when Lucas enters the picture. I generally don’t like the romantic subplots that YA authors seem to want to insert even into thrillers/adventure stories. But in this case, the chemistry between Lucas and Zee really pulled me in. I love their banter, which is playful, sometimes tense, but always feeling natural. For example, when Zee, frustrated at being unfairly labelled a killer because of a prophecy, crushes a box, Lucas quips, “Did that make you feel better? Are you starting your murdering spree with the wooden box?” [48%]

I also love this bit of dialogue:

I watched him put the pouch [of blood] to his lips.

“What are you looking at?” he said after swallowing half the bag.

“It just looks… weird, you drinking out of that thing.”

“What?”

“I just thought vampires would like, you know, vicious while drinking blood,” I said. “You look like you’re in kindergarten with your juice pack.” I regretted it when I saw his face.”

“Shut up and drink your juice.” [45%]

Oh, Zee, always saying the wrong thing. Zee is clumsy and awkward, and in some books, these characters are usually token clumsy (really gorgeous, but just clumsy enough to be adorable to the love interest) or stupid clumsy (Bella Swan, anyone?). Channing manages to make Zee seem real, and I can definitely relate to some of the stupid things she says. For example, upon discovering some new physical skills as a vampire:

“Did you see that?” I asked. I pointed over my shoulder with my thumb.

“See what?”

“See me not fall out of the truck? I did like, a flip or something,” I said.

He rolled his eyes and walked by me.

“That was amazing,” I said, to no one in particular. [40%]

Yes, if it were me, I’d be doing flips over being able to do flips as well. Most of all, I love that Zee’s vampire abilities are just as much liability as asset. When she tries to leap onto a cliff, for example, she misjudges her own strength and accidentally crushes her handhold instead, almost toppling off the edge. Minor quibble: Zee’s later transformation into a skilled fighter seems too quick and convenient. I understand super strength, but some of her moves were practically Jackie Chan. That being said, I do like that she progresses from being scared and helpless to being a fighting force to be reckoned with. I just wish the transition was smoother.

There was a twist near the end that seemed almost deus ex machina, which is always a disappointment for me. Still, thinking back on the rest of the story, I saw where Channing planted hints of this throughout. The ending felt a bit anticlimactic, but the twist also created some very interesting implications for the rest of the series. With this ending, I have no clue where Channing can take Zee’s story, but I’m definitely intrigued.

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Thank you to the author for a copy of this ebook in exchange for an honest review.

Review | River Dragon Sky, Justin Nicholes

I’m a sucker for good cover art, and the cover of Justin Nicholes’ River Dragon Sky caught my attention immediately. Kudos to Justin Kowalczuk for the beautiful cover image.

In a debate over the importance of guanxi (connections, or, more specifically defined by the professor, nepotism), university student Zhuan He argues that the importance of guanxi shouldn’t even be in question — we all use it. “It is part of the human being,” she says. “You have to cut out his heart if you want to cut out guanxi.” She adds that if you ask Americans what they like about China, “they will say the Chinese are cooperative where the Americans quibble. It’s in all the textbooks.” [64% of eARC]

I include these quotes because they seem to me indicative of the general thrust of this novel. River Dragon Sky explores the connections between five characters — Zhuan He, her boyfriend Feng, Russian professor Kal (also Zhuan He’s lover), American missionary David (also Feng’s professor), and the seer Junping (who believes Zhuan He is his long-lost daughter Xiling). Their lives intersect in a web of connections — Kal for example frames David as Zhuan He’s lover, so Feng becomes insanely jealous of the wrong man; Feng becomes an obsessive stalker, yet Junping as well watches Zhuan He closely; the university is concerned over arson cases when we know fairly early on the arsonist’s identity; and so on.

Adding to the complexity of the story are shifts in time and perspective — we learn about Junping’s courtship of Xiling’s mother, as well as Kal’s history of trouble at school. Nicholes also adds cross-cultural complexity — Zhuan He, for example, knows that her classmates view her relationship with Kal as a bid to leave China, and as she says in her debate speech, “If you do [marry your coach], maybe you marry him because he can enable you to do something. Can you go abroad to study, to practice English, without guanxi?” [64%] It’s quite a lot for a novel to cover, and in the hands of, say, David Mitchell or Haruki Murakami, this tale could have been amazing. Unfortunately, in Nicholes’ hands, the story just feels disjointed, convoluted and erratic. There are a few moments of beautiful insight, and chapters that drew me in to the story, yet for the most part, I found myself either confused or detached.

A lot of it, I think, had to do with language. In attempting to create an atmosphere of great import, Nicholes veers too much into abstraction and waits too long before giving the reader something concrete to grasp. Take for example the following passage:

The memory that Junping had teased from the American was from a long time before. He sucked in a break while thinking it over. His stomach burned.

In other life, Junping had lifted a newborn’s hand to his face and pressed his lips into its palm. The smell had been sour. The child had been cradled in blankets beside a woman.

Junping stumbled back against the wall. He brought his hands up to his face because he couldn’t believe what was happening. Another ghost approached him (they had visited, shifting shapes, before), another omen come to unsettle him, to prevent him from glimpsing, when that walking stick lay in his deathbed in place of his body (the sign that he’d achieved immortality), the all-subsuming Tao.

It was a girl. She was reading the hexagrams he had drawn into the paper. He couldn’t believe it. He couldn’t believe who this was. But it was true, and it all made sense.

But why? After all these years? [5%]

The narration is probably supposed to be dramatic, building up to the big reveal about who the girl was. Unfortunately, the dramatic impact is undercut by the lack of clarity. The sentence about the ghost is a prime example of what I mean about abstraction. Nicholes injects some spirituality and horror into the narrative, but uses an overly convoluted sentence with bracketed clauses that distract more than elucidate. As well, at this point, we have no idea why Junping is so affected, or why he’s thinking of ghosts and the Tao.

It’s frustrating for a reader, and even within this passage, we still have so many unanswered questions. Who is this newborn and this woman? How can we tell when the flashback begins and ends? Where did these hexagrams come from? Who is this girl, why did she have such an effect on Junping, and what does all this have to do with the baby?

The language also gets oddly formal, or at times rather awkward, making me wonder if this is a translation (it’s not). Take for example “before he had molted the identity of Yang Dong” [5%], “Kal had revolted against his dad” [27%], and “he’d absconded with Darlene” [27%].

I don’t usually mind difficult books, but in this case, the language wasn’t compelling enough to put me under its spell, and the payoff (various revelations and insights throughout) didn’t feel significant enough to merit the self-important tone. It’s not a bad book. I did enjoy the kung fu scenes and the relationship between Zhuan He and Kal. I also found Feng’s stalker tendencies creepy and David’s attempts to stay out of the love triangle drama somewhat amusing. Overall, however, I think much could have been streamlined and clarified.

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Thank you to Signal 8 Press for an eARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.