
I love murder mysteries, small town settings, and romantic comedies, so I went into this expecting to absolutely fall in love with May Day, the first in the Murder by Month Romcom Mystery series by Jess Lourey. Bonus: the heroine Mira is a librarian, her love interest Jeff is an archaeologist, and Mira has not one, but two, adorable pets: a dog and a cat. What’s not to love?
Well, first I should say that I did enjoy the mystery overall. I love the small town silliness that just demands we suspend disbelief: Mira walks into town and immediately gets jobs as librarian and reporter with barely even an interview, and okay, we’ll take it because why not? I also found the mini-romance with Jeff cute, and love that what started as a fairly light-hearted meet-cute led to the discovery that he had much more of a connection to the town than Mira realized. Too bad he had to be the main murder victim, but I did appreciate the author explaining that she was new to the genre when she wrote this and wouldn’t kill off the love interest so cavalierly in future.
The mystery itself was also nice and twisty. I totally didn’t guess the big reveal, but in hindsight, it seemed more obvious than I’d expected, so kudos to the author for keeping me in the dark. I also thought the author did a good job in explaining the killer’s motive. And thinking of the series beyond this book, I thought the backstory about Mira’s father being a convicted murderer gave her an interesting edge as a series heroine. It didn’t really factor much into how she solved this mystery, but the seeds have been planted for Lourey to explore that interesting tidbit more in future instalments.
My one big snag–and granted, this is more about me than the novel–is that for a story that hit so. many of my sweet spots and I was so eager to love, instead it was…just okay. I don’t know if future instalments got more interesting, but this one just felt like the author cobbled together a whole bunch of awesome ingredients, yet ended up with a rather bland stew. It was filling enough, sure, but not quite something that hooked me in and make me keep wanting more. And considering how poised I was to fall in love with this book, that was a letdown.
I also didn’t quite fall in love with Mira herself as the series lead. She says and does things that I think are supposed to be funny, but often just comes off mean or insensitive. For example, she describes older adults as “wrinkled ornaments” and is shocked to discover some of them lead active lives. For an adult approaching 30, a milestone age that can get people starting to reflect on their own mortality, her attitudes towards elderly folks feel pretty mean-spirited.
Then there’s a minor subplot about her friend being pushy about setting Mira up with a professor. Yes, the friend overstepped, and yes, Mira was very clear with the friend that she had no interest in dating after her most recent lover was murdered. But then, in letting the guy down, Mira allows a misunderstanding to happen, and the whole thing is played presumably for comedy, but is actually rather cruel considering the impact Mira’s actions are likely to have on the man.
Overall, it’s not a bad book. The mystery was pretty solid, and the characters had just enough interesting tidbits to keep them from being flat. There are also seeds being planted for a potential romance with one character, and a lasting frenemy-ship with another, and possibly the series will pick up once those get on more solid ground. But for now, this was just okay.
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Thank you to Firefly Books Ltd for a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

